8
Apr
2020
NaNoRiMo
Three Sounds I Heard at Noon Today
I listened. Only the wind
shaking the bamboo.
A dry patter on the edge of something.
Only time running away,
only the ticking of the clock.
Remorseless. Regular.
Only the buzzards
circling the air,
bleating high up, high up in the blue.
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I love the fresh and relaxing style from this poem, I wish I could know what was in the mind of the poet when she/he wrote it.
These lines of the poem sounds very pleasant. Honestly, after reading it and imagining it, it me in a different zone for few seconds.
This poem really does what I needed for my minds. It has touched me in the right section of mind. Thanks for this good poem post.
Lovely composed, I love the uniqueness of this piece. Thanks for sharing
Only you can define you or allow people rubbish you. That’s why it all you. That’s my meaning
The wind, clock and the buzzards huh? A very creative poem. I did read it twice to understand it though. this is a very poetic way of relaxation? At least this is how I read it.
This is a wonderful peom, it has a very deep meaning. it will make more sense when we apply it to our daily lives
This poem reminds of my time in school. I always was keen to reading poems and understanding their meaning.
I love how you make this writing both relaxing and stressful. Keep inspiring your readers.
Such a nice poem. I used to read poems when I was a student. Today, I rarely have a chance to appreciate a poem.
These lines of peoms are really touching. I’m trying to understand the deep meaning. Because it means a lot to different people